Saturday, January 14, 2012

The Beginning: Teaser...

Hey everyone this is Sierra, I am new to this writing a fan fic so please brace yourselves. Let me know what you think by commenting on here or DMing me on twitter --> @StilliRiseTM leggo! <3



As usual, Onika got up at around 7 o' clock. *Yawns* she slowly rise from off her pink pillow, wiping the sleep out of her eyes. As she glanced to the right side of her bed a huge smile grew on her face. Wow, what a beautiful man he is, laying there so peacefully, and looking so sexy with his bare body teased her. His abs glistened as the morning sun gleamed down on him. She examined his whole body as if it were the first time laying eyes on him. She usually did this often seeing how their circumstances were. It took them forever to finally become a couple.  She asked herself several times how did she get so lucky to have such an overly handsome, overprotective companion. He was more than her man but her best friend and hype man. Thoughts were running through her mind on what she would do to him right than in there but she decided to push those thoughts in the back of her mind for right now. While Safaree stayed in the bed, Onika went to the bathroom to release herself. After, she headed to the kitchen to cook as. She was always so serious when she cooked for Safaree because after a nice meal came a beautiful making love session. She took out all her ingredients to start preparing this huge feast for the couple. Breakfast consisted of: turkey sausage links, egg whites, her infamous honey biscuits that was her Grandma’s secret recipe that was passed down to her after she died, and freshly squeezed orange juice that SB loved to gulp down. As she is in the groove of cooking up this spread, she hears heavy footsteps coming from behind her. As the footsteps got closer she felt two firm hands gracefully wrap around her petite waist. She closed her eyes as she continued scrambling her egg whites and took in his presence. God, he felt so good. He slowly moved closer into her to the point where his manhood was now pressed against her backside. She let out a faint moan. She slowly turned around towards him and kissed him passionately on his lips. This made her want to take him right then and there, but she had to finish up the meal. Right when she thought to stop her alarm went off. *beep beep beep beep* It was only just a dream…………. To be continued

18 comments:

  1. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Why is it JUST a dream??? Let it be Safaree! lol This wasn't bad for you first time. I wanna see what happens tho!

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  2. Ohmygosh Si <3 yayy. wait, OHMYGOOOOOOOOODNESS! She was talking about Safaree! But oh snap, it was a dream! *wipes forehead,* lol. Hahaha okay good. I love the way you described it. Very nice. LOL Whoopi Goldberg :D! Gosh. Okay, please post soon! This is very interesting. I need to know ,ore :D. You know my twitter name and stuff. Take Care, Ditto :P.

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  3. Huuuuuuuhhhh As soon as I saw his name I knew it was gone be a dream -_- Zoser. It was good tho ^_^ I dnt like to be teased, post soon.

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  4. This was mad good, im pressed it was a dream!! *Stomps foot* ZONT ZOO that U did really good!
    Cant wait till u post!!

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  5. Wow, this really is a teaser. LOVE IT.

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  7. O_O A DREAM?! Wut?
    This is gooooooood.

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  8. OMFG! Just A Dream?!?! I thought they was finna get it in ...-___-
    Good Teaser

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  9. This was GREAT!!!. Why it gotta be a dream though? It had me all excited and what not, Then BOOM, Dream. I cant wait to see whats to come. That bets not be Drake she laying next to outside of the dream. Good Job Seirra. Post soon.

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  10. NOOOOOOOOO SIERRA!! It was so convincing! :o

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  11. WOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH *Nelly voice* it was only just a dreaaaaaaaaaaam. That was great! Onikafaree allll the way(;I wonder whats gonna happen :O

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  12. This Was CUTEEEEEEEE!! Why'd It Have To Be A Dream? :-( I Like This! Continue!!!!

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  13. waaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiitttttttttt a DREAM? this better be real, but she just had a happy dream. lmfaoooooo good job on the teaser :)

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  14. WOW..wet dreams Nika?
    But damn this was a good start!
    I've never read an Onikafaree story before so you're was the first!
    AMAZING job for a teaser Sierra s/o to you!

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  15. Lmao Some dream that was!! This was really well written for ur 1st time. Great Teaser!! Still can't believe it was ONLY a dream though!! Had me fooled! ^__^

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  16. Whhaaattttttttttt only a dream?! llaawwddddddd. This is a good start!!! PLEEASEEEE keep going. PAUZ.
    -Juwanna.

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  17. Mi phone is a fuckin dickwad!! I typed up a REALLY nice comment & it deleted the shit!! >.< Jus kno I agree with Lauren ---_---

    Great job barb.

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  18. S/O2 u bew bew. That was awesome. It was good to be your first time. pauz. It flowed so well too.
    You had me going, though. I was not expecting it to be a dream *sigh* u cant be playing when it comes to Onikafaree bew. ZONT ZOO IT. I hope it soon becomes a reality though.
    -@MinajFanDetroit

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